User talk:Octopus Baybee

Guide:Surviving_in_the_Underworld
Hello. I've recently seen your guide, it looks very useful and full of information. The only problem I see is that it uses words from your view such as I, myself, etc. and also looks like a giant chunk of reading. Sections help readers find what they need to know quickly, and this lacks a few. Again, I'm not trying to put down your effort, just suggesting a small cleanup. Mind the tag at the top, I just couldn't find a better template. 05:05, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback, i'll be sure to revise my guide to further improve it. I apologize for referencing myself; i'm used to writing solo guides off wikis. I'll be sure to keep all this in mind while revising and writing future guides. Octo 14:54, 18 August 2011 (UTC)