Board Thread:Administrator's Noticeboard/@comment-29265488-20160725151057/@comment-4661596-20160725152207

Well, I reverted most of your edits because the grammar was incorrect, and the facts that you were adding were fairly redundant to the article. You also used the 2nd person phrasing a lot, which we try to discourage whenever possible. Please do not re-add what was deleted, but you are free to make additions if you are able to comply with our editing policies. It would probably be helpful to read them.

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