User blog comment:Lolza100/A little guide for new players/@comment-4042778-20111026174101

Okay mate, you are trying to make a guide, but before doing that please either check out other guides, or a few things you have to have in a guide.

Just a few tips: - Start your sentences with a capital, and end the sentence with a dot, to indicate when a line is over. This makes it much easier to read - Do NOT start the guide by first saying some random stuff in the game and then in the middle of the text say "and now on to the guide" This is just misleading and annoying to read. - Do not compare this game to another, even though other people tend to do so. This will only end up in a discussion. - In making a guide, do no end it by saying "Now you figure out the rest". A guide is to tell a person how the game works, and they're probably checking out the guide BECAUSE they cant figure it out.

Try again mate, but for now a 1/100